Writing Tip #7: If At First You Don't Succeed... Take a Break Before Your Brain Explodes.

This will be a short one, written while I'm waiting to get a ride back home, but this is possibly the most important lesson I've learned in the last year of stresses of "real life" getting dumped into a blender with my brain, my free time and my first failed attempt at a novel, and all of it getting puréed together, so I wanted to share it with you all: I'm here to talk about the paramount importance of taking a breather after you've written that first draft of a book.

I'm sure we've all grown up hearing the expression about "try, try again", and I won't argue that that's not an important part of success; you get your butt kicked the first time by something you really want/need to achieve, then you pick yourself up and tackle the thing full-on again. That's how you get the things really worth having.

Of course, tackling something hard more than once hurts. A lot. Especially if you're unprepared, and still getting your breath back from Round 1. 

Case in point: writing a book, then having that agravatingly clear hindsight inform you that all that effort didn't plop out that instant hit your were hoping for. 

Your stomach sinks. Round 1 kicks your confidence in the gut. But you're down, not out! So up you get, and back to it you go.

You want it to go like this: 

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But it ends up ending more like this:

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...with varying degrees of tears and tissues. Round 2 (and maybe 3, and 4... depending on how big of a glutton for punishment you are) leaves you in emotional traction.

Not good. And certainly bound to make you far exceed your allowable budget for whichever comforting deliciousness you subscribe to, to deal with feeling squashed by what used to be bright and sunny aspirations of awesomeness (e.g: pizza... wine... pizza with wine... lots of pizza with lots of wine... your weight in peanut M&Ms - not speaking from experience of course... sigh).

So this week's writing tip in a nutshell: pace yourself. Seriously. 

There may be those among you who write something and have no problem at all getting it polished and good to go. I commend you and envy you in equal parts! But then there are those (myself included) who pour a lot of time and energy into something that ends up not working, and the task of fixing it ends up being something they're not quite up to just yet. From my own experience and many fellow writing nerds I've spoken to about this, that second kind of writer is a lot more common than the first.

The important part is to cut yourself some slack, and give your brain room to figure it out. Finish writing what you're writing of course (no matter what you think of it), then go through it afterwards with a forgiving eye. If you find yourself wanting/needing to fix the poor sucker but at a loss as to where to start, take a few big steps back for as long as you need. Put it on a shelf, and start something else in the meantime. Come back to it later and try again - I guarantee the time away will have cleared your head enough for you to work your way through whether to scrap it, fix it, or rewrite it altogether, and it'll do it without leaving your delicate writer ego as a pile of quivering mush.

Be better than mush. You'll live longer, feel happier... and not have the local pizza place know your name and usual order off by heart.

Not that that happened to me... damnit.

IT LIVES!!... Part 3 (or The [Not-So-]Fantastical Tale of an English-Degree Graduate in the "Real World")

So. Another almost-year gone by... and what does this absentee blogger have to say for herself this time?

Heh. I've been keeping busy! And have had my brain occupied and focused in so many different directions that blogging had to go on standby for the duration.

How to explain without giving all the boring details no one actually cares about... let's see... the last time we "spoke", I had just finished my very first novel (yay!), and had settled into the editing process (ugh), just in time for graduation (yay again!). Then... *cue dreadful realization music*... REAL LIFE showed up again.

Job hunting.

Bills with no income.

Sleepless nights spent imagining doing card tricks for coins on the sidewalk somewhere, and chewing on bits of my wallpaper for sustenance.

Then finding an income. But despising the job and leaving it.

Back to bills with no income.

And now settled into retail purgatory, but happily with a paycheck I can mostly live with.

And... oy... realizing after months of feverish editing and unsuccessful submissions to agents that the book that felt amazing and brilliant while I was writing it was... well... neither amazing nor brilliant. In fact, it kind of stunk. Although there are parts of it I'm still proud of. But hey, first novel! Practise for when I actually get around to being brilliant, right?? ...Heh. In theory :)

But the biggest news of all is the main thing I have focussed on building since leaving university, and what's kept me away the most from getting back to this blog: a business of my own! Well, co-owned with my sister, to be exact :)

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I'm incredibly excited to announce the launch of The Violet Hour: Author Services and The Violet Hour: Literary Magazine, two branches of one business designed to help authors realize their publishing goals, as well as give them a way to showcase their work.

Working for the literary journal Existere for the three and a half years I was in university gave me such a taste for it all, so getting this going is incredibly exciting!

So now I've put my first novel comfortably in hibernation pending a gradual re-write (after I've stopped being mad at it), I've got a retail job that'll keep me at least mostly fed, and I've got a direction to channel my university degree into, and renewed creative juices to get back to reading, reviewing, blogging, and working on a new novel idea. And I know I've said it all before, but now I've got a business partner and burgeoning business to hold me to it: you'll be hearing a lot more from me from now on - stay tuned, and feel free to check out the links below to the websites that I built for each half of the new business!

The Violet Hour: Author Services

The Violet Hour: Literary Magazine

The A to Z Book Diary: "F" is for Finally Freakin' Finished

So. Holy crap. I'm done!!!! MUA-HA-HA-HA!!!!!

Ahem. 

What I mean to say is... WOO!!!!!!! FIRST DRAFT IN THE BAG, BABY!!!!!!!!!

Whoa, okay. Easy now. Let's... let's just take a step back here. I can handle this post maturely. I know I can.

Calm. Cool. Collected. A dignified literary mind.

Dignified... dignified... dignifi--

IT'S DONE!!!!!!!! IT'S ACTUALLY DONE!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS SO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Alright. Nope. Just not going to happen. I know when to admit defeat. Mindless, crazed excitement at having a completed first draft of my first book is all that's in there right now. I got nothing else.

I'll just have to--

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Man. This is only getting worse... I need to go lie down somewhere. I'll be back again when this wears off a bit.

...Oh no... I feel a celebratory dance coming on... I am helpless against it!... I gotta hit "post" on this before it takes hold... AGH!!!!

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Final Word Count of Pre-Editing 1st Draft: 78,949

The A to Z Book Diary: "E" is for Envisioning the End

Wow... I have to say that a part of me wasn't entirely sure if I'd even make it to this point, after all that time of just imagining, stewing, brainstorming and hoping, but... it's actually here: the beginning of the end of my first book.

You can't see this, but I'm doing a pre-celebratory jig in my desk chair.

...It's probably for the best you can't see this.

Anyway, this past year (or nearly a year, I think) has been a crazy whirlwind of figuring out the details in advance as well as working it out as I went, going through spurts of incredible productivity and dry spells of months of doing almost nothing. But I've finally come to it - writing the climax and conclusion I've been planning since the start!

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And it's turning out to be a very interesting combination of coming out exactly as I originally thought it would, at the same time as parts of it are a complete surprise to me.

I was convinced once upon a time that I had it all decided upon down to the letter, no matter how much other things in the story sometimes felt like I'd stuck it in my blender and hit "puree" a few times. As it turns out though, I really only had the basics of "how", "when", "where" and "why". And while those basics certainly made it through, overall the in-depth details for all those elements were pretty well up in the air. Now that I've gotten around to writing this final chapter-and-a-bit, I'm basically figuring it out as I go and realizing that the end entails far more additional working-out than I gave it credit for!

I suppose I can't be too surprised, at the end of the day - after all, with how much some of the key plot points and most of the smaller in-between elements have evolved from their original form, it only makes sense that the ending couldn't conceivably stay the exact same as it used to be, either. Really, I should have realized that planning it out was one thing, while writing out its entirety would bring up a whole new slew of details altogether.

Well, either way, seeing it all start to finally culminate in these last moments is a billion times more satisfying than I could've possibly imagined. So darn close now - if only I didn't need to do pesky things like work... finish the last few weeks of school... move out of my current apartment... eat and sleep...

Sigh. So many interruptions. But the end is nigh regardless, and the satisfaction is sweet!

...Heh, just have to keep in mind that at the end of this, I'll have roughly 140 single-spaced pages of editing to tackle. 

Oooooh boy. "The end"? This is really kind of only the beginning isn't it?

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Word count as of today: 71,672

Writing Tip #6: Just Plain "Characters" Can't Do the Job Right - Give Your Reader More to Work With

You want to know who the most two-dimensional, unconvincing, static, uncompelling, forgettable, inauthentic, jaw-droppingly boring, least relatable characters are?

Here's the answer: ...they're the ones who are Characters.

Let me explain.

When a reader sits down with a story, there is already a suspension of disbelief that needs to happen for them to accept the fictional backdrop you create for it. From the start, you're asking them to believe in whatever truths you establish in your plot and the dynamics of your plot's world, however out-of-the-ordinary they may be. And they want to believe it because it'll give them an experience to enjoy. That's why they and we read any fiction at all. But you need to help them along. And the best way to do that is to populate that plot and that world with the most realistic characters you can manage.

So what's the problem with writing characters as just Characters, just people who exist in your fiction? Simple: when they're just "Characters", the only things that are really set up about them are things the author feels are immediately relevant to the plot and the other supporting characters. This means that they get a grab bag of quickly identifiable traits that the reader can remember them for and that the plot can pull from (for example, a Young Adult novel hero who is simply established as tall, handsome, brave, pining after whatever generic love interest is nearby and coherent enough to reciprocate something, and capable of surviving ridiculously dangerous things... the end). It's not to say that Characters won't get the job done - they serve their purpose of serving the reader their story, using that Trait Grab Bag to nudge the plot along from one point of conflict to the next, and on to the eventual resolution that their traits dictate they can accomplish.

But that's all they'll do... serve a purpose as a cog within a bigger picture. They won't engage the reader like they could be engaged, won't suck the reader into their lives and get that pull of empathy or hate or hope for their journey or whatever you want them to get. They won't make the reader truly care about what happens to them and their world, at least not as much as they could. Characters that are just Characters leave the reader on the outside of a story, looking in. They put up walls. They make suspension of disbelief harder, and work against your passion for the story you're telling.

So what do you write instead? Well, you scrap those Characters, and you write PEOPLE.

Take any character you're trying to write, and don't think of them in terms of how they'll serve your story. Give them a name, and go all Dr. Frankenstein on them, and give them life. Make the inanimate, the fictional real by giving them not just the Trait Grab Bag, but all the parts that make a person an actual person, and make those parts a functioning whole.

Start here: What's the context for the world that your plot and characters exist in? Is it in the past? Is it futuristic? Post-apocalyptic? 

Next step from there: Whatever it is, what kind of people can exist within it? What are the different classes of people? Are they separated by income? Nobility of birth? The city they live in? What differentiates groups of people from each other?

And next after that: What class of person is your character supposed to be? Once you've got that figured out, you can set up the Grab Bag of traits that go with that particular class as a foundation of characteristics (for example, if they're of a poorer class, then they know what it is to be hungry, to struggle - so they're tougher in order to survive, and maybe a bit bitter against those of higher class or against the system that keeps them poor). And after you've got that Grab Bag out of the way, make that character a person with traits unique to only them - traits shaped by their family lives within their class of people, the friends they have or haven't had, the mistakes they've made in the past, the hopes they have for the future. Take example from your own personality if you'd like: whatever you can think of that makes you, well, you, use all those different types of elements to fill in the blanks and make your character a living, breathing person.

After that, you use whatever you can of what you've worked out within the story itself, and whatever you don't use still serves as an influence for how these characters act within the story, interact with each other, and influence the overall story itself. If every character you create is written as a Person, not a Character, then what you have for your plot is a living population that will make your reader give a crap as to whether or not things turn out for them, and where they end up by the time it's over. Nothing generic or forgettable. Something unique, fresh, engaging. Everything the Doctor ordered for "Hell yes!" fiction.

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So do your story and reader a favour, and go be Dr. Frankenstein - give your creations life!

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Word count as of today: 66,231

The A to Z Book Diary: "D" is for Dodging the Dimwit

Plot exposition is no simple matter. I've really come to appreciate this.

On the surface, it doesn't seem too complex: I have a story line, I have characters that live in that story line, and that story line has key points that the characters will travel through along their merry way to the climax and denouement. All I as the writer need to do is to make sure the readers know what they need to know as they need to know it in order for them to travel along in a book as I want them to be able to do. That means exposing the plot in pieces that do the job bit by bit.

Fair enough. Seems like a straightforward requirement, right?

Not so. At least, not always. Because there are so many ways to do it poorly. 

Cliches. Information dumps. Death-by-description. Insanely unrealistic conversation structures. The list goes on. And each point on it has the potential to distract, discourage, or outright bore the reader. Probably bad things to do, when I want them to like the first book enough to read the next one. 

One that I'm noticing is particularly tricky to avoid though is the Dimwit pitfall: the authorial habit of having one or several characters scattered throughout the story that a writer might make purposefully slow, or improbably and dangerously out of the loop on things so that another character can have the excuse to enlighten them, and thereby enlighten the reader.

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Of course, it's not to say a character can't not know something (I know - shame on me for using a double-negative there... but I'm not ashamed enough to fix it). When you look at it, there just seems to be a significant difference between a character having to naturally learn something they don't already know, and a character being the dreaded Dimwit. The naturally-learning character knows as much as is logical for them to know at the time the story starts, and when they're put into new situations with new things their character would have no reason to know about beforehand, then sure, using their ensuing education as plot exposition is fine. But a Dimwit, on the other hand, seems to be that character that reasonably should know something already, but for some reason unrealistically needs reminding or enlightening - like if you have a character who's a spy, who reasonably should know about a widely infamous bad-guy, but the author needs exposition, so the spy's suddenly the Dimwit who needs to be told all about this infamous baddie by someone else in the story.

At least, that's how I understand it. And in thinking I understand it, I'm noticing a few of my side characters edging towards this. I think I've managed to avoid making my principal character an idiot, which is good... but yikes, it's just way too easy to just plop someone in there and claim they're out of the loop so you can have an excuse to put in moments of, "Hey, Reader! You should know this - so here ya go."

Hm. Now I feel like I need to troll through all my previous chapters on a Dimwit hunt, just in case.

Or should I save that joy for the official Edits?...

...No, I'll go nuts imagining them possibly sitting there. Just waiting. Chewing up scenes with debilitating dunce-ness.

Gah.

Dimwit hunting I go, then.

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 Word count as of today: 64,325

Writing Tip #5: Keep Those Gears Shifting and Stop That Progress from Stalling Out

Ever try to learn how to drive stick, in all its manual-shifting glory? (I hope so - if you haven't, the metaphor that backbones this post might well be gibberish to you.) If you have, probably one of the things that stands out most in your memory of the early days is just how many friggin' times you went to shift gears and stalled the sucker (unless you're one of those that picked it up almost instantly - in which case, lucky you!... hmf). I got my start on an automatic, and I know the stall-outs on manual cars haunt me. The sheer number of traffic lights and stop signs I've gotten myself stuck at is funny in hindsight. At the time of the actual stalling? Not so much. Lots of colourful and enthusiastic cursing ensued.

There's a point to bringing this up. I swear. A decent one, too. And I'll come back to it in a minute.

First, I'm going to go ahead and state a few painfully obvious facts: writing a novel takes time, and it is work (fun work for the most part, granted, but work nonetheless).

What doesn't get as much consideration sometimes is just how tough it can end up being to power through and carry your story from page one right to "The End", without screeching to a halt somewhere along the line and dumping it into your "on hiatus" pile for a while (or permanently). I know that when I went to start this first novel that I'm working on now, I went in with this rosy idea that because I had what I thought was a worthwhile plot driven by characters I was excited to write, all I needed in order to do this thing was a mighty roar and a "Can-do!" grin, and I was set.

Heh. Not so much. You know what I'm talking about.

Because here too, with the exceptions of those that have things come easily to them, when you really get into trying to do it, you come to truly realize that, holy crap, writing a novel really is work. Tough work, that you alone are responsible for putting yourself through and that's almost impossible to predict how long it'll take to get through. Something that demands plenty of time and energy and afternoons/evenings/wee hours of the mornings that could be spent doing almost anything else if you weren't frying your brain with research or beating your head against the wall over your latest bought of writer's block, and...

...and you may inevitably think (during those times where you're progressing so little you'd swear you're moving backwards) something along the lines of this: "I may love to write, but The Beatles had it wrong when they said 'All you need is love.' What I need is something to keep me at this *bleeping* thing before, in a moment of weakness, I drop my laptop/pen-and-paper in the nearest fire pit with a lit match and a healthy supply of kerosene. Kaboom."

Now, this is where we come back to car stall-outs. Stall-outs suck. Big Time. You're driving along fine, then after you've slowed down, you hit that gas pedal and get a horrible clunk. And go nowhere. And curse the universe - loudly - while still going nowhere. But there's that one magical thing that when you remember it's there and you remember how to use it, your life spent stick-shifting involves significantly less swearing and more going: that spectacular little third pedal that makes all gear shifting in stick-shift cars possible, its highness The Clutch.

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Writing a novel, or anything of a significant length, is no different than driving stick. You need a Clutch: at least one particular thing that's there to keep you moving, and to get you moving again whenever progress slows down.

For me, my Clutch is a little magnetic whiteboard on my fridge where I've written "Novel Word Count" at the top, with "Goal: 75,000 words" underneath it, and my current word count going just underneath that. That board is my magic tool, the thing where I can see how far I have to go, but especially how far I've come and how much closer I get every time I get some writing done for the day. Whenever I need it, I look at that thing and it gets me proud and freshly motivated. Because as much as I love to write, sometimes motivation is a tough thing to find when it's such a long haul.

Of course, yours doesn't have to be a running word count. If that just feels like it puts undue pressure on the whole thing, get creative! If, for example, your characters are embarking on some kind of physical journey across a distance, draw up a little map of their route and mark off each spot along the way as the characters reach them in your story. Or, as another example, if your characters are in a survival novel where they're up against, say, a zombie hoard, and you know which people will be zombie kibble before you reach the end of the story, put together a Zombie Kibble chart, with some sort of zombie cookie jar you can stick each character into as the story progresses and one by one they get munched.

Anything. Anything you can come up with that you can use to mark your progression and prove to yourself that you're making headway, draw it up, write it down, print it off, whatever. Just have it there, so when you get to stall-out levels of "Kaboom" proportions, you have your Clutch there for you to use to its fullest.

Less swearing. More going. No kerosene.

Worth a shot. Give it a try!

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Word count as of today: 61,978