Tuesday, March 3, 2015

Writing Tip #4: Want to Fill Those *Bleeping* Plot Holes? Just Gotta Know Your Own Rules.

Some things you can only really come to know once you're neck deep in them...

...like what happens to your driver's license if it takes a trip through the washer and dryer in your jean pocket...

...like what becomes of your stomach when you polish off that container of leftovers at the back of your fridge that you weren't too sure about...

...but especially, and horribly, just how many plot holes one story is in fact capable of producing. And how many is that? A freakin' whole heck of a lot. Plus fifty more.

In fact, it is scientifically proven (...alright, it's not proven anywhere, but I swear by this...) that plot holes feed off of climbing word counts and are spread like the common cold of the typeface world - one loose end sneezes on a perfectly healthy plot twist, and before you know it, everything's a congested mess of literary phlegm that hacks its way to a stand-still. And at the end of the day, this poor phlegmy manuscript is so miserably ill, that it almost seems like the kind thing would be to put it out of its misery, cut it loose and put a stop to the wheezing.


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Sounds pretty bleak, indeed. But like with any cold, there IS a way to beat these suckers. And here's how, in three basic steps:


1) Figure out what world your story is unfolding in.
                     (**This goes hand-in-hand with figuring out what story you're telling - a 
                  matter of geography, point in time, and degree of balance between realism 
                  versus fantastical.)

2) Write down the rules that govern your story's world
                    (**The number and types of rules varies by story based on your story's 
                  complexity and/or how out of the ordinary its world is, but write as many 
                  as you can think of, and keep adding to it as you go, as needed; everything 
                  from your character's personality quirks and hangups, to any restrictions 
                  placed on the character by society and their station within it, to what levels
                  of technology/magic/poverty/etc. your character is used to, to what kinds 
                  of problems people in this world might run into if they were in the wrong part
                  of a town/countryside late at night. Whatever parameters you can think of 
                  that will dictate what can happen within this world and within your 
                  characters, put them in there.)

3) Use those rules as your story-writing GPS - listen to them, ALWAYS, and update them as needed.
                       (**Ultimately, this is your world. You decide what is and is not possible. 
                       But the most important part to filling those plot holes is to make sure your 
                       world's/character's rules make sense with each other with little to no 
                       contradictions - adjusting them as necessary if you notice any - so that if 
                       and when you come across moments in your plot that suddenly don't 
                       seem to fit with previous or planned events, or you realize you've written 
                       yourself into a corner where you're not sure how your character could 
                       handle or escape a conflict, or you've run into any of many roadblocks, 
                       you can go back to your established rules and use them to navigate. The
                      more detailed you make them, the more you can plug in whatever plot hole
                      you've run into and ask yourself, "What isn't working? What rule[s] is it 
                      breaking that makes it not work, and what do I need to change so that it 
                      works again?")

And that's really it: know your world, know its rules, and write according to them.

This works.

I swear.

Nine out of ten dentists recommend this, and the tenth dentist is coming around as we speak.

Give this a shot against your plot holes, and if it doesn't clear things up... 

...well, remember that I'm no expert. I just claim to know stuff. Blame my university profs for convincing me I had so many brain cells to rub together.

~\\//~

Word count as of today: 55,962

2 comments:

  1. Great Post Celeste, Thank you for coming into my radar, because this post really had deep meaning. I have written a few stories, and you are right, sometimes I get so involved, and then it's like the car of my imagination, just hit the dump truck of reality; now I am sitting there with a crumpled hood, and no way to drive home. These are great writing tips. Thank you

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    1. Thanks +T James! I'm thrilled that this and the other tips might prove helpful for you - if you're interested in seeing more, I will be updating the Writing Tips thread once at the start of each week. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and leave a comment!

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